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“Grandma Essay” or College Essay As Eulogy?

September 29, 2016 by Sara Nolan

The grandma of the grandma essay

The "Grandma Essay" Everyone Warns You About...Is Not what you think! I'm writing to tell you a story.  This story ends with a college essay that became a eulogy. It was a topic no-no turned yes-yes: the "grandma essay" your counselor warned you about. But this story started as a young, earnest kid, J, clutched a pencil, and tried to tell me, like every other gritty kid I coach has told me, that he is determined. Show me, I said.  Tell me a story that shows me. Or maybe it started differently.  Maybe we were eating sandwiches while we worked together, sifting through his life, looking for particulars, and he mentioned how his grandma only liked her chicken sandwich this one particular way. Uh-oh, he said "grandma."  Cue the sentimental violin chorus.  Now, how a person likes a sandwiches can reveal a lot about personality-- it's true.  But an applicant is supposed to be careful not to focus too much on other family members in the personal essay-- right? Right, guys? And we ALL KNOW "the grandma essay" is soggy toilet paper of a topic, right? (Even if I'm personally a sucker for the elderly). But my interest came from somewhere else. My interest was peaked because of the look in his eye, the flicker that showed me that one comment about grandma had sent him to some gold-nugget inner place.  Continue Reading …

Filed Under: Integrity, Uncategorized, Wisdom, Writing Tips Tagged With: college applicants, deeper meaning, family members, personal essay, topics, writing advice

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