Student Feedback: Sara met me in my struggle to help me refine my essay. She asked: “Do you love your essay? Please read it to me.” These simple questions elevated my entire view on a personal statement. She wanted to understand me before giving me feedback. After multiple drafts, I made it happen. Without Sara, I wouldn’t have been able to balance my poetic tone with narrative. Now I am proud of how much strong writing came out of me.
Sara’s commentary: We read her essay over and over. This is one of the best things a student can do to develop their voice and hear where they are going astray.